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Valerie XII YAY! It's only a little bit. Please enjoy.  I'm still working  
 
 
I couldn’t help but smile back.  “I agree.”   His eyes slid to my lips.  “I love your smile.  It has this secret feeling about it, like you don’t use it very much.”  Those silver orbs caught and held my eye.  “That’s a shame.  It’s so beautiful.”   I felt my cheeks flush.  “Stop it.”   He cocked his head to the side, brow furrowing.  “Why?  Don’t you like com Valerie XII
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Valerie XI WARNING! This one is MEGA, UBER, REALLY SHORT! Sorry but it's all I got!  
 
 
 
I smiled at him. “We shall.”   He immediately started whirling me around the room in huge graceful circles.  The room flew by behind his head.  The disco ball made the air sparkle and the fog made everything just so surreal.  It was absolutely magical.  Jer watched me with his gorgeous eyes, black hair blowing around his face.  He was just stunning.   There was nothing in the world that could compare to this.  The rest of the world seemed so far awa Valerie XI
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Valerie XIt was short, sweet and soft and then he was pulling me toward the stairs again.  I couldn’t help but wonder what the hell it was about me that attracted this guy.  He was so amazing (aside from the whole drug dealing thing that I was pretty sure about).  How was it possible that he’d looked past all the Sarahs and come straight for me?   The bar was a lot bigger than I thought it would be.  It looked like all the walls had been knocked out of the entire basement.  We were standing at what looked like the back of the room.  Tables were scattered along the walls wi Valerie X
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Valerie IXJeraud smirked.  “Need help?”   “Probably, yeah.”     
 
With that wicked smirk still on his face, he grabbed me around the waist and threw me over his shoulder.  I landed with an “oof” as his shoulder dug into my stomach.  I watched as his knees bent and he launched himself off the ground.     It was weird watching things from this angle as we flew up and over the window sill.  Wait.  That sill was higher than my belly button…   He landed lightly.  Too lightly.  I only had enough Valerie IX
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Stupid Valerie LOL

Wed Mar 18, 2009, 8:50 AM
I freaking love that story but I just can't seem to write more. I think it's because I'm not sure what I want to happen next. I mean I've been going crazy with ideas and writing in between the beginning and the end that I already have written and I've been writing those but I just can't seem to finish the bar scene. I want it to be sweet and make Valerie just like gush over him but I can't decide.

Any suggestions?

I would love your help, because you love my story so much! So please! HELP?

Like I said I have a lot of ideas but I can't decide. It actually mostly depends on how fast things should go between them...

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~alexacl Aug 10, 2009, 8:21:26 PM
Hows the Valerie story coming? I'm so excited for more :D
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~alexacl Jul 31, 2009, 9:49:58 PM
I was reading your blog entry thingy haha&i was wondering if you could post those ideas you have up so we could all see what would be more interesting to read :) idk? just a suggestion!
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~KanDance824 Aug 1, 2009, 1:06:13 AM
Yeah. That is a good idea. I've already decided though. I really hope everyone likes it. Now I just have to write it. Thanks for the suggestion :D

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"I was in a smack-anyone-who-even-slightly-bothered-me mood today, so I was avoiding the general populous." Brooke Chase from MY STORY

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Or just visit my page. Both of my stories are there!
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~alexacl Aug 1, 2009, 10:19:47 AM
Okie dokie!!! Cool!!! I can't wait! You don't even know! :D
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Mood: Joy ~alexacl Jul 20, 2009, 1:43:10 AM
heeyy i was wondering if you were going to finish the valerie-no title story thingy :) its really good and i would love for you to continue writing it! thanks! keep up the amazing work!
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~KanDance824 Jul 20, 2009, 8:58:49 PM
Yes. I'm definitely going to finish it. Like I said I'm having an AWFUL writers'block, but yes I plan to finish it.

Thanks for reading. I'm happy that you love it so much. That keeps me from giving up sometimess. I'll try and get something up soon,I promise!!

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"I was in a smack-anyone-who-even-slightly-bothered-me mood today, so I was avoiding the general populous." Brooke Chase from MY STORY

Anyone interested in reading PLEASE contact me!!
Or just visit my page. Both of my stories are there!
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~alexacl Jul 20, 2009, 9:26:32 PM
Yeah, sorry to sound pushy :/ I promise I don't want to push you into writing more of the story, it has to flow naturally. I can't wait until you publish the rest, I know it will be amazing. :)
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~KanDance824 Jul 21, 2009, 11:01:34 AM
You're fine. No worries. I need to get my butt in gear. LOL I'm working I am.

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"I was in a smack-anyone-who-even-slightly-bothered-me mood today, so I was avoiding the general populous." Brooke Chase from MY STORY

Anyone interested in reading PLEASE contact me!!
Or just visit my page. Both of my stories are there!
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~alexacl Jul 21, 2009, 11:57:17 AM
Haha, alrighty cool!! :) Can't waiiiiiittt! :D
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~Nieme Jan 23, 2009, 2:19:57 PM
Thanks for the fav!

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